Come in and Cover Me by Gin Phillips

This novel is part love story, part history, part ghost story, and part archaeological tale - and it sort of fails to be very good at any of them. The main character Ren is closed off and definitely more comfortable with ghosts and the past than with her life at present. Her brother Scott, who died when she was 12, visits her as a ghost and so now she sees other ghosts too, ghosts who help her in her archaeological digs. After a stunning find years before, Ren is now on the hunt for one artist of ceramic Mimbres bowls.
It seems like the book is decently well researched, but the characters themselves are flat, their story is incomplete and their dialogue is often so stilted, so cliched, that I often found it difficult to continue reading. The author tries too hard to create 'mood' or to imply emotions through her words, but does too much telling vs showing. As a reader, I felt like there was no chance to draw my own conclusions from the narrative; rather than telling me the air is charged with sexual tension, create chemistry between characters and make me feel the tension.
Quite frankly, the whole romance subplot just felt contrived. I was never convinced that Ren was capable of true feelings about anything- she seems to have abandoned ship when her brother died (even though they were never close) and she's estranged from her mother, so her closest relationships are with the dead people who stalk her at dig sites.
All in all, I was disappointed with this book, which had the elements of a good story but never really came together into an enjoyable read.
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